May 16th Commuters reflections

A jumbled tongue
Moving in a distanced unison
Of foolish thoughts
When I try to find peace along
Lines parallel of iron
And an unattended home
In a short movement
long distance
Aches knees
Mind and ears

In other words
Quiet talking so loud on the train.
No one cares about you have going on
I am tried and trying to get home and your loud voice is a distraction from me trying to find a few minutes of peace

So stfu